GREAT NEWS FOR SERIOUS WRITERS:

Storyfix.com has revised its fee structure, drastically reducing the price of an
in-depth, thoughtful analysis of your story. The result is, without question...


... the finest value available  
anywhere in the manuscript-
evaluation and story-coaching
industry.

Your story...  reviewed… chewed… renewed...

... for only $495.00*

(*price can fluctuate depending on length; screenplays analyzed for $250.00)

        Welcome to Storyfix.com               

How is Storyfix.com different from other manuscript edit/critique services?

Your "story coach" at Storyfix.com is a  working author, a bestselling novelist and screen-
writer who brings two decades experience in teaching the craft of storytelling to the role.  
While editing tells you what’s wrong with your story (and indeed, is a subset of the Story-
fix.com approach), the higher goal is to help you improve your story through balanced story-
telling execution, and by exploring creative solutions and alternatives.  

Storyfix.com is all about adding value.  Your project will be analyzed using a developmental
model called
The Four Corners of Story, which focuses on concept, structure, character
and theme.  Only when these four elements are solidly in place, delivered with a compelling
narrative voice, will the power of your story become fully realized.  Using tough criteria,
comprehensive checklists, comparisons within your genre and the insightful, critical
sensibility of a proven professional, Storyfix.com can make it happen for you.

Beyond editing, there is analysis.  Beyond analysis, there is Storyfix.com



Who is the story coach at Storyfix.com?

The creative engine behind Storyfix.com is bestselling author Larry Brooks.  In addition to
his experience as a writing instructor and twenty years as a writer/creative director in the
advertising and marketing industry, Larry has written four nationally bestselling novels since
the year 2000, including a
USA Today bestseller and, in 2004, a novel named by Publisher’s
Weekly to their list of the “Best Books of the Year.”  He has also written award-winning
screenplays, several of which have been optioned.  

The inspiration for Storyfix.com came from attendee feedback at Larry’s writing work-
shops, who say his Four Corners Of Story developmental model is the best approach to the
craft they’ve ever heard, for some even after decades of study.  The idea behind Story-
fix.com is to bring this fresh, criteria-driven approach to individual projects, to analyze
manuscripts against proven standards for concept, structure, character and theme, and to
bring them into balance in context to the rules of the genre and the power of the writer’s
narrative voice.

If there’s a weakness in your story, Larry will find it.  If there’s a solution to the problem –
and there always is – Larry will help you explore it.  If there’s an opportunity to take your
story to a higher level, Larry will help you seize it.  

Visit our
MEET THE STORYFIXER page for more background.  You are also invited to
visit Larry’s author website:

                                         www.booksybrooks.com

for more about his various writing projects and the journey that inspired Storyfix.com.

       A great story, well told.  That’s the goal at Storyfix.com.

The Storyfix.com commitment

Storyfix.com understands what it takes, and what it means, to get your story right.  Larry
Brooks has been there, and the developmental model he has created is a response to the
needs of writers who need real solutions and real processes, not the rhetoric of critics.  
While the model is a powerful developmental tool for stories under development, it is just as
powerful as a benchmark for completed drafts.  Both applications are available through
Storyfix.com.

Storyfix.com does not believe in brutal honesty, but in complete, clear and constructive
feedback, delivered with value-adding solutions that bring your project closer to fruition.  

If you’re looking for affirmation rather than feedback, send your manuscript to your
mother.  But if you’re looking to get your project fleshed-out, fixed, or just plain finished,
and if selling it is your ultimate goal, check out Storyfix.com.

           Your story: unblocked, unleashed and uninhibited.

                                                *******

      
To book Larry Brooks for your next writing    
   workshop or seminar, and to read participant
   reviews, go to
MEET THE STORYFIXER.

What is Storyfix.com?

Storyfix.com is a resource for novelists and screenwriters and other writers who seek to
improve their projects through professional critiquing and coaching.  And to do it quickly,
cost-effectively, and with the confidence of knowing your project will be treated with the
respect it deserves.  Storyfix.com transcends editing by applying a proven, proprietary
developmental model to take your story to the next level.  If your goal is to sell your work,
Storyfix.com can help you get there.

           Storyfix.com.  Because a story is a terrible thing to waste.
Storyfix.com